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From: Do Eun Lee <delphine0813@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, Apr 4, 2014 at 5:34 PM
Subject: Do Eun, Lee - Introduction to English Presentation (1) / Fri 3,4
To: JBH JBH <profjbh@gmail.com>
From: Do Eun Lee <delphine0813@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, Apr 4, 2014 at 5:34 PM
Subject: Do Eun, Lee - Introduction to English Presentation (1) / Fri 3,4
To: JBH JBH <profjbh@gmail.com>
Helllo. professor Halberg :)
My name is Do Eun, Lee.
I send the link of my presentation and PPT used at presentation.
From Naeun Kang to Do Eun Lee
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: The topic was interesting for me because I don’t know anything about baseball such as rules, players, etc. Through your speech, I got interested in baseball. Also, you introduced several quotes that can be the important less in our life, which was meaningful for me.
Preparation
: I thought you practiced a lot, because you looked so calm. Though your voice was not big, your calmness made me feel calm too. Also, you connected to the next part very smoothly, which was stable.
Manner
: Since your voice was not big enough, it didn’t look that you were confident. However, as I said, you were very calm and spoke softly, so I thought audience might feel calm too and comfortable to listen your saying.
Organization
: I thought you organized well. At the beginning of speech, you introduced well what you were going to say. Then, you moved to the next part, introducing several quotes and meaning. After that, you said what the baseball meant to you, and finished with a funny quote. So it was easy to follow you.
Opening
: You started your speech by introducing yourself and what you were going to say. However, there was no special hook grabbing our attention. If you gave us an interesting question or example, it would be greater.
Body of speech: It was well organized. In the body part, you introduced several quotes relating to baseball, and explained the meaning. Even though I didn’t have any information about baseball, I could listen to and have interest your saying because you explained well.
Conclusion
: You told to us what the baseball meant for you. It was very effective. Also, you finished with a funny quote, ”The saddest day of the year is…the day baseball season ends.”, which made me laugh and feel how big the baseball was for you.
Additional comment
: I thought your speech was very calm so I felt comfortable to listen. However, as I said, your voice was small, so if there were many audiences, your voice can't reach to the person seating at the end in a room. If you speak a little beat loudly, you will look confident as well. Thank you for letting me have an interest in baseball and the great lesson!
from Byungwook
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The topic you chose was interesting because I had an interest in baseball but never had an idea about the nice quotations from the players. So it was meaningful to me.
Preparation 5
Seemed you had full research on those players' words and many visual materials were helpful to enjoy your speech.
Manner 5
Your pronunciation was clear and attitude toward us was straight. Seemed you had enough practices before you gave us a speech. Also the subject you chose was about your favorite sport, baseball so it was easy to absorb your words.
Organization 5
Id like to say your speech was well organized because you said what you were going to tell us, you told us something you wanted to tell us and you gave us a clear speech.
Opening 5
Using slides made me keep having attention to your speech from the beginning and helped me following your topic easily.
Body of Speech 4
I wish to give you full mark on the body of speech, but, in my opinion, it would be a bit better if you have your own quotation on baseball. There were lots of facts but the idea was little bit ambiguous.
Conclusion 5
Using quotation at the last part of your speech was effective and it came to me as a climax of your speech.
Additional comments
I really enjoyed your speech regarding to baseball and the famous quotes from legendary baseball players which I have never known that the quotes were from the players. It was good to know. Thank you for your dedication!
-Byungwook