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From: 박광현 <kwangster@naver.com>
Date: Fri, Apr 4, 2014 at 6:26 PM
Subject: Introduction to English Presentation
To: profjbh@gmail.com
From: 박광현 <kwangster@naver.com>
Date: Fri, Apr 4, 2014 at 6:26 PM
Subject: Introduction to English Presentation
To: profjbh@gmail.com
Hello Professor my name is KwangHyeon Park
This is the link to my presentation
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6-uE-k6t_hc
Please enjoy and have a nice weekend.
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Hi, my name is 윤기영.
ReplyDeleteSpeech Value : Your topic was pretty big for me because your presentation was about 'successful future and success'.
Preparation : I was impressed with your preparation. You prepared presentation for your speech very hard. Images were inserted to emphasize your speech and help audiences understand. Also, I could see how hard you practice from your clear speech.
Manner : Your manner was very good. I think your voice was very confident and clear so that I was able to understand what you are trying to say.
Organization : You suggested the organization of your speech at opening. You mention that the speech is consisted of three parts and suggest the topic of each part. This was helpful for me, as an audience because we could follow your speech easily by knowing the whole organization of your speech.
Opening : You used a hook by asking question to audience. It was fun that as audiences in your video clip actually raised their hands. I could see that your speech actually encouraged people to participate. Your opening was interesting enough to focus on your speech.
Body of speech : Your speech was logical. It was well organized. You suggest what kind of person you were in the past. Then, you told a story when you were in the army and told a lesson from your experience and how it impacted on your life. It was clear.
Conclusion : Your summarizing about your speech was brief and effective.
Additional comments : Your speech was very clear and worth to listen. However, I felt that it was a little bit long, and I saw several parts that could have been removed to reduce your speech time. If time of the speech was regulated a bit, your speech would get better, in my opinion.
Hi, my name is Myung Jae Lee
ReplyDeleteFirst, I think that your speech is well prepared and logical.
Also, opening is good, because you explaned how speech will go.
Attitude is also good, your voice is calm and effective.
However it's little bit long speech, but it's good presentation.
Thank yu for speech.