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From: 김 현진 <cooljames241@hotmail.com>
Date: Fri, Apr 4, 2014 at 10:46 PM
Subject: Introduction to English Presentation / Youtube speech
To: "profjbh@gmail.com" <profjbh@gmail.com>
From: 김 현진 <cooljames241@hotmail.com>
Date: Fri, Apr 4, 2014 at 10:46 PM
Subject: Introduction to English Presentation / Youtube speech
To: "profjbh@gmail.com" <profjbh@gmail.com>
Hello Professor!
My names is Kim Hyun Jin 김현진 201300986 currently taking your 9AM class! and I will post the link to my presentation below
Thank you!
Hello, Hyunjin. This is Kim Hyunju from the same class. I really enjoyed your speech. I want to comment on your posting following the evaluation sheet. The topic that you chose was interesting for the audiences who were all college students. So it is meaningful enough to pay attention. And in the point of preparation, I think it would be much greater if you add some more specific statistics data or visual aids. In the manner of your speech, I think you were confident and got full of energy so you did a job. Your speech was well-organized so I could easily understand and the message was clear. The tool for power nap that you showed in your speech was quite interesting so I think it definitely got attention from the audience. But you may want to put it in the opening because it would arouse audience’s interest in your topic. The logical flow of what you said in the body was great, but as I said at the beginning it would be much more better if you add specific data to support the benefits of power nap. Lastly, I think your conclusion was also simple and clear.
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The topic was Power nap. It was a very interesting topic, and relates to many of the university students. I think all of your audience would have been interested by your topic. Also, you had scientific supporting ideas so it made your presentation more realistic.
2.Preparation&Manner
You look well-prepared, and confident. You made enough eye contacts, and gave a clear presentation.
3. organization
You had a hook in the start of your presentation. Also, since you started with the definition of power nap, and explained the difference with regular nap. This allowed me to understand the concept of power nap.
4. flow
You gave the organization of your presentation at the beginning of the presentation. This helped me to expect what the presentation would be about. You restated your main points at the ending of your presentation ,and that helped the audience to remember the important ideas from your speech.
Thank you for your wonderful speech!