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From: 조희수 <hscho1993@naver.com>
Date: Fri, Apr 4, 2014 at 8:56 PM
Subject: English Presentation Speech
To: profjbh@gmail.com
From: 조희수 <hscho1993@naver.com>
Date: Fri, Apr 4, 2014 at 8:56 PM
Subject: English Presentation Speech
To: profjbh@gmail.com
Hi! Professsor.
My name is Cho Hee Soo in your class.
Here is the link.
See you next week!
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From Yooli
ReplyDelete1.Topic
Your topic was friendship. I think it was a good topic, since everyone can relate to it. You gave your own experience, and that made the speech more realistic.
2.Preparation & Manner
You seemed a bit nervous. I think because you looked like you were trying to remember the whole script, you were a bit uncomfortable. I think it would be better if you just say the things in your mind, instead of memorizing the script. Then you would be more natural and comfortable.
4. organization
You had a clear opening, introducing your main points. Also, you had three clear main ideas, so it was easy to concentrate and know where your speech was going. However, I think you might have for got the conclusion. It would be good if you restated your points at the ending.
5. flow
I think your opening was a bit too long. It would be better if you simply introduce the main points, and then move on to the body right away.
Thank you for your speech!:)