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From: 박경윤 <fagefage@naver.com>
Date: Fri, Apr 4, 2014 at 9:20 PM
Subject: Kyeongyoon Park- English presentation class
To: profjbh@gmail.com
From: 박경윤 <fagefage@naver.com>
Date: Fri, Apr 4, 2014 at 9:20 PM
Subject: Kyeongyoon Park- English presentation class
To: profjbh@gmail.com
Hello, professor! I'm Kyeongyoon Park in you English presentation class.
This is the address where I post my assignment. And I also attach the PPT that I used.
Have a nice weekend~^^
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ReplyDeleteFrom Naeun Kang to Kyeongyoon Park
ReplyDeleteSpeech Value
: The topic was meaningful for me. First, the topic was related to my speech topic too. Also, what you advised was really helpful, since I am also one of people who do not express feelings and emotion to people surrounding me: friends, family members. So ti will help me change my thoughts and actions.
Preparation
: I thought you prepared a lot. You showed us a text message from your friend at the beginning of your speech. Also you made enough visual aids, so it was easy to follow what you were saying.
Manner
: You looked very sincere and confident because first, your voice was calm and clear, and I thought what you said was from your mind and thought. These attitudes made me believe and trust your opinion.
Organization
: I thought you organized very well. At the beginning of speech, you gave us a hook, which was a problem of your friend. Then, you gave us a solution that we should express our feelings and emotion. After that, you also explained why we should express, and the merits of doing it. So it was easy to follow you.
Opening
: You started your speech by giving us several questions and example of your friend. I thought it was a great hook, which could grab our attention and let us know what you were going to say.
Body of speech
: As I said, it was well organized and logical. You gave us a solution “Express our feelings and emotion” And then, you explained well why we should do to people surrounding us, giving us understandable reasons.
Conclusion: You summarized what you were saying in one sentence, and suggest your opinion to us. It was effective.
Additional
: I thought your speech was well organized, logical and trustful. However, you looked at your script much during your speech. Except the one thing, it was great. Thank you for your sincere speech!
Hi, my name is 윤기영.
ReplyDeleteSpeech Value : I was interested with your speech topic since I realized how important that expressing emotion. Several advantages you suggested in your speech really encouraged me to express my emotion.
Preparation : I was impressed with your preparation. You prepared presentation for your speech. Especailly, when you showed the image of the actual text message you mentioned, I was convinced with your argument. I could see how hard you prepared for the speech through the presentation and images.
Manner : Your manner was very good. Your voice was confident and clear that I could listen to your speech comfortably.
Organization : Your speech was well organized. You suggested the problems of not expressing emotion at the first part by mentioning about your friend's text message. Then, you gave advantages of expressing and suggested reasons why we should express. It was clear.
Opening : You intrigued the audience by asking a question at the beginning. As an audience, I was able to easily concentrate on your speech because your question was very good hook.
Body of speech : Your speech was logical. It was well organized.
Conclusion : Your summarizing about your speech was brief and effective.
Additional comments : If you tried not to look at the paper at your hand a bit, your speech would have been better, in my opinion. I was impressed with your preparation for the speech.