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From: 이지숙 <77sz77@hanmail.net>
Date: Mon, Apr 7, 2014 at 11:44 PM
Subject: Introduction to Presentation / 200902732 Jisuk Rhee
To: profjbh@gmail.com
From: 이지숙 <77sz77@hanmail.net>
Date: Mon, Apr 7, 2014 at 11:44 PM
Subject: Introduction to Presentation / 200902732 Jisuk Rhee
To: profjbh@gmail.com
| Dear Dr.Halberg
Thank you for understanding, sir! This is the link of my videotape for presentation class.
See you on friday at class :)
Best regards, Jisuk Rhee --------- 원본 메일 ---------
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Hello I'm Bae Youngha taking the 11am class.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed watching your presentation and I am to leave comments on your presentation based on the evaluating criteria :)
1.Speech Value
- It was much interesting enough for me to enjoy your presentation. I think your topic had me listen carefully because you told us about your own experience.
2. Preparation
- Well prepared. Although there were a few pauses, the overall presentation seemed well prepared with your powerpoint.
3. Manner
- I saw your confidence and calmness when you give a speech, because you didn't seemed nervous.
4. Organization
- Your presentation was simple and clear so that the audience can easily grasp what you want to say.
5. Opening
- In my opinion your opening is very good. I found that you used some skills learned from our textbook, including introducing yourself and informing the audience of the span of your speech.
5. Body of speech
- You said in body of speech about your story chronologically. I think the flow was good. At the beginning your speech you said there is a memory of terrible mistakes and then said about the specific experience you have.
6. Conclusion
- In my opinion I suggest that conclusion be a little longer and include summary of your presentation.
Hi I'm Yeon Hong Jung from the same class.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed watching your speech. Because you said your 'terrible mistake," I was imaginating some really really terrible mistake. But since I heard your story, I thought it was a really terrible mistake. If I were you, I would be so embarrased maybe I can't even be able to live there anymore!
It was very easy to understand and clear because you prepared a PPT. Without the picture, it would have been hard for me to understand. If there is only one thing that I want to suggest is, maybe you should speak a little longer at the conclusion part.
Thank you for reading!