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From: 권현이 <hyunlee1994@naver.com>
Date: Fri, Apr 4, 2014 at 11:26 PM
Subject: Speech video link Hyunyi Kwon
To: profjbh@gmail.com
From: 권현이 <hyunlee1994@naver.com>
Date: Fri, Apr 4, 2014 at 11:26 PM
Subject: Speech video link Hyunyi Kwon
To: profjbh@gmail.com
Hello professor.
This is Hyunyi Kwon from Introduction to English Presentation class.
Here's the link of my speech.
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Hello, I'm Oh yoojung.
ReplyDeleteI like that your topic was about traveling alone. I also loved the part that you felt something after the trip. Things you felt and learned during the whole trip, from planning to the end, applied to your situation right now. The overall speech was good and the topic was meaningful. However, it would have been better without the script, and with more confidence. I think the script made your voice a little bit less persuasive. Overall, I loved your speech!