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Date: Fri, Apr 4, 2014 at 5:15 PM
Subject: Professor,
To: JBH JBH <profjbh@gmail.com>
From: since8913 . <since8913@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, Apr 4, 2014 at 5:15 PM
Subject: Professor,
To: JBH JBH <profjbh@gmail.com>
Hi, Professor.
I'm Naeun Kang taking the introduction to English Presentation class(Fri. 3-4)
Here is the link to my video clip.
See you next week.
Bye.
Naeun
from Byungwook
ReplyDeleteSpeech Value 5
I believe personal experience is the most interesting subject for speeches. The speech was about what you experienced and felt during your home-staying so it came really meaningful to me.
Preparation 5
Research on your personal experience wouldn't be necessary but you prepared your speech with visual materials so it was easy to focus on your speech.
Manner 5
It seemed you had enough practices before you gave us a shot because you had full eye contact with us during the whole speech and the speech was about your true story so the content was sincere.
Organization 5
As you named your speech, the purpose you were trying to appeal was clear that what you realized from your home-staying experience.
Opening 5
You started the speech with kind words and told us what you were going to tell us so it easily led us into your topic.
Body of Speech 5
It was really interesting following your logical flow of your speech because you mentioned the bad impression, how you changed your mind, and what you believe what is really important in life. You suggested an idea with handful of facts like pictures and what your feelings.
Conclusion 5
I loved the moment when you burst into tears on the day you had to move on and realized what is important in life, which are people and love.
Additional comments:
I enjoyed your speech because you suggested an idea with your personal experience which occurred in abroad so it came to me as a sincere story. Visual materials were simple and effective. Thank you for your dedication.
-Byungwook