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Thanks!JBH
On Fri, Apr 4, 2014 at 8:55 PM, JBH JBH <jonnyh@hufs.ac.kr> wrote:
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From: 강유리 <sallyooli93@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, Apr 4, 2014 at 6:30 PM
Subject: Dear professor
To: JBH JBH <jonnyh@hufs.ac.kr>> Hello, professor! This is kang yooli from your Friday 9 a.m class again.
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> I found out that my previous link wasn't working, so I'm sending you the new one!> It is http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7AgaDZKIG90
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> See you next week!
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> Best regards,
> Yooli Kang
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Hello I'm Bae Youngha taking the 11am class.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed watching your presentation and I am to leave comments on your presentation based on the evaluating criteria :)
1. Speech value
- Your speech was really interesting and also it contains a lesson about life. I think it is of greate value.
2. Preparation
- Well prepared. I think you must have rehearsed a lot because your speech was natural and you prepared the meterials you made your own.
3. Manner
- In my opinion, you gave a presentation in an relaxed but prudent manner. And I can feel your confidence on your thoughts. I highly appreciate that.
4. Organization
- I think you organized your speech and purposefully. There was a lesson you want to give and opening, body and conclusion support it well.
5. Opening
- In your opening, you introduced yourself and what you're going to talk. It was really good. In my opinion, it could be better to say more about turning points, because I myself have to find the relavance between turning points and importance of concentrating on the moment which you said in the conclusion.
6. Body of speech.
- Two specific details of cafeterias and your experience are well elaborated to give your message.
7. Conclusion
- Restated the topic and well summarized what you said. I think your conclusion is good enough to impress your audience.